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Sheila
Wow, that was a magical work of art.
It was splendid, brought a tear to my eye.
Bravo!!
Christopher
It never ceases to amaze me on the fine talent that just flows from your pen. Bravo
Lydia
This OK but I’m not sure how it relates to my birthday.
Annie
I hate to criticize, but, I think I’ve read this somewhere before. Are you sure you wrote this? And, did you mean to use all caps? It makes people thinking you are yelling. Thanks for sharing. your friend, shirley
Lorraine
A series of useful information……….LOL you must be really bored…….haha
Kelly
It’s different. At the same time it resembles something I can;t put my finger on. Good job. I like it a lot. Keep writing. You have plenty of potential.
Beatrice
Yawn.
Juan
This is exactly like the experience of a wine connoisseur who has just inhaled and tasted a freshly opened bottle of its succulent contents after the orgasmic explosion of the corks release.
Aroma: Plum and clove intertwine on the nose.
Palate: Like its French cousin, this melody offers hints of ripe blackberry, jammy boysenberry, black currant, violet and vanilla flavors, and rich bacon farts.
Supple and balanced, notes of cinnamon and chocolate peek through on the finish!
Yes, ladies and gentlemen, wine with a hint of “rich bacon farts.”
Yummy.
Carlos
I’ve sat by, silently, over the past couple of years
and watched with interest, the evolution of your
poetry. At times you have impressed me, confused me,
and made me say out loud, “Damn, I wish I had written that!”.
Today however, you have brought your craft to new heights,
and I’m proud to say “I knew you when…”.
Mr. Pulitzer, are you listening?
Joanne
Buk,
will you remember
this poem, forever?
I dropped a tear…
it is very beautiful.
Arnold
this is very captivating takes you through different stages I like it very different.
Lorraine
mmmmm…it is a little Frank Zappa..ish…
kinda cool..actually…
I did steal it….and……* I turned it into a rap song…
hahahahahaha. evil little….* teehee..
Peggy
Ummmmmmmmmmm………….
I’m like
speechless.
ma
Bryan
MAN!!! How do you do it? Effortlessly too.
Brian
I have cut and pasted it to my heart. Forever. Thanks for sharing!
Erik
Change the total points to 6066.
It reads and flows better.
And nice use of hoar. Oh, horoscope. Never mind.
*two snaps and a short hand wave outward*
Rebecca
I laughed, I cried, it’s as if you had read my personal journal and delved into the very depths of my soul.
Someone hand me a kleenex..
**wipes tear from eye and blows nose**
Louise
I see I am having a positive impact on your style. Thanks for sharing. It’s almost as good as Warhol’s Soup cans or Milton’s cereal boxes.
Brent
You brought me to tears. My rating is a ten for you my dear Buk.
Love, honey
Chad
When I see the zero
Answers, I think of
m y
p o e t r y (sniff)
10.1/10